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Meaningful Celebrations

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 33; the thirty-third edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is 'Celebrations'
Peacocks dancing in the rain
kids running down the lane

A farmer toiling in the field
land lord counting upon the yield

While a poor waits for the day's meal
Its the pain which rich can’t feel

A mother finds joy
in her child's first cry

reasons are deliberate
for us to celebrate

Diwali is one such occasion
for prayers & confession

bursting crakers n pouring honey
is nothing but wasting money

Do a noble deed
where to the needy u shall feed

do take a pledge,
to donate the underprivileged
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13 comments:

  1. simple conveying - ample meaning. Good one. Cheers and good luck for BAT.

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  2. That's a great take.. I do support the pledge; In fact, I support a few.. :) Good luck..

    Someone is Special

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  3. a wonderful take...need of the hour
    "Do a noble deed
    where to the needy u shall feed

    do take a pledge,
    donate the underprivileged"
    ATB for BAT :)

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  4. Simple verse but deeply meaningful :) Good luck for BAT:)

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  5. I am feeling good now.. yours is the third entry from the BAT 33 (in a row) - motivating poem.. :) .. Congratulations for spreading such a noble message through a beautiful poem! :)
    (I am reminded of OMG - movie) You have truly defined God.. :) ..and helping the needy and serving God.. :)
    ATB for BAT :)

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  6. and I loved your banner picture :)

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  7. Wonderful. Straight to the point and beautifully written! :)
    ATB for BAT! :)

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  8. Very simple and easy to understand. very good rhyming. And very good meaning. So, a very good poem :)

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  9. There are many reasons to celebrate but we shouldn't cause others problems because of that. Nicely written :-)

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  10. Noble sentiments indeed. However, don't try too hard to rhyme. Otherwise, good imagery. Keep writing and you will get noticed!!!

    Kaviraj

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