This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 33; the thirty-third edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is 'Celebrations'Peacocks dancing in the rain
kids running
down the lane
A farmer toiling
in the field
land lord
counting upon the yield
While a poor
waits for the day's meal
Its the pain which
rich can’t feel
A mother finds
joy
in her child's
first cry
reasons are
deliberate
for us to
celebrate
Diwali is one
such occasion
for prayers & confession
bursting crakers
n pouring honey
is nothing but
wasting money
Do a noble deed
where to the
needy u shall feed
do take a
pledge,
to donate the underprivileged
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simple conveying - ample meaning. Good one. Cheers and good luck for BAT.
ReplyDeleteThat's a great take.. I do support the pledge; In fact, I support a few.. :) Good luck..
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
a wonderful take...need of the hour
ReplyDelete"Do a noble deed
where to the needy u shall feed
do take a pledge,
donate the underprivileged"
ATB for BAT :)
Simple verse but deeply meaningful :) Good luck for BAT:)
ReplyDeleteI am feeling good now.. yours is the third entry from the BAT 33 (in a row) - motivating poem.. :) .. Congratulations for spreading such a noble message through a beautiful poem! :)
ReplyDelete(I am reminded of OMG - movie) You have truly defined God.. :) ..and helping the needy and serving God.. :)
ATB for BAT :)
and I loved your banner picture :)
ReplyDeleteThank u :)
DeleteWonderful. Straight to the point and beautifully written! :)
ReplyDeleteATB for BAT! :)
Beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteVery simple and easy to understand. very good rhyming. And very good meaning. So, a very good poem :)
ReplyDeleteNoble sentiments indeed. However, don't try too hard to rhyme. Otherwise, good imagery. Keep writing and you will get noticed!!!
ReplyDeleteKaviraj
Thank you,
Deleteya will do so ..